Wednesday 5 December 2018

100 Word Challenge Week 13

There once lived 3 brothers who were mad scientist. There names were Mike, Timmy and looney. Everyday the 3 brothers went out for a walk. One day they herd someone saying"anyone who made 100 elixir will get 4 wishes and those 4 wishes will come true. The siblings truly believed in that so they went home and got to work. Days went by they were only able to make 54 potions. They wanted to make more but they were exhausted from making potions. finally they made 100 potions and got there 4 wishes and those 4 wishes came true.
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3 comments:

  1. Acasp77 December 2018 at 09:08

    I liked how you made your story very creative and how you made a story about siblings, but remember to put capitals when you start a sentence.

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  2. krishaleeleeme7 December 2018 at 09:19

    I really like your story it was fun to read and it was interesting but there were some words that were repeated more than 2 times so what I suggest next time is to use different words .

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  3. Dogemaster1427 December 2018 at 09:20

    Great story but but you may want to re read and put a capital f in finally they made 100 potions...

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